Describe a photograph of you that you like
-Where it was taken
-When it was taken
-Who took it
And explain how you felt about it
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老师布置的作业？
Elpisleepy:道出真理
你这次分享了你最喜欢的照片是小学一年级暑假去北京长城拍的！还是爸爸出差带上你和你妈妈一起去的，真好呀！羡慕了！🤩🤩🤩我给你这次的分享打14分。🥳🥳复杂度5分，准确度4分，流利度5分。你用到了“不到长城非好汉”的谚语英文版One who fails to reach the Great Wall is not a hero，好厉害呀！😃😃还用到了很多高级的词汇“extremely”"unique""luxurious"“stunning”，强👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻。准确度扣了一分是因为“the photo is taken”这里出现了语法错误，应该用过去式“was taken”。🤭要是再细心一点就完美啦！收下我的膝盖！🥰
