G类雅思写作母语教师范文 | 劝朋友别买房英语考试Cat | G类雅思外教写作范文

G类雅思写作母语教师范文 | 劝朋友别买房

1分钟 ·
播放数363
·
评论数0

你好呀,欢迎收听:英语考试Cat 🐱🐱🐱🐱

我是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。需要查看这篇作文重点词汇中英对照的朋友,请点这里

需要查看这篇作文重点词汇中英对照的朋友,请点这里

题目:

A friend is considering buying a house nearby, but you have decided to leave the area due to a rise in crime. Write a letter to your friend advising them not to move into the neighbourhood. In your letter:

  • Recommend that your friend not go ahead with the purchase
  • Give the reasons behind your decision to leave
  • Suggest possible alternative areas that you know

你的一位朋友正考虑在你家附近购置房产,但你却因该地区犯罪率上升,决定搬离此地。请给这位朋友写一封信,建议他不要迁入该社区。信中需包含以下内容:

  • 建议朋友不要着手购置此处房产
  • 说明你决定搬离的原因
  • 推荐几个你了解的、可作为替代选择的区域

范文:

Dear Sam,

I hope you're doing well. I recently heard that you're thinking about buying a house near my place, so I wanted to write to you before you make a final decision. To be honest, I really don't think it's a good idea for you to move to this neighborhood.

The main reason is the crime rate, which has gone through the roof over the last year. In fact, there has been a noticeable rise in break-ins and car thefts on our street alone. As a result, I no longer feel safe living here, especially in the evenings, which is why I've actually put my place on the market.

If you're still keen to buy a place somewhere in the southern part of the city, you might want to look at areas like Richmond or White Rock instead. Though they are a little further from the city centre, they’re much quieter and have a much better reputation for safety.

I really hope this helps you make the right decision. Feel free to give me a shout if you'd like any more info or advice about specific communities etc. It’d be good to touch base anyway since it's been a while.

Cheers,

Alex

亲爱的Sam:

你好!

我最近听说你打算在我家附近购置房产,所以想在你做最终决定前给你写这封信。说实话,我真心觉得你搬来这个社区不是个好主意。

最主要的原因是这里的犯罪率—— 过去一年简直飙升。单说我们这条街,入室盗窃和汽车失窃案就明显增多了。也正因为如此,我住在这里再也没有安全感了,尤其是到了晚上。所以,我其实已经把自己的房子挂牌出售了。

如果你还是想在城南置业,不妨考虑里士满或白石镇这些区域。虽然它们离市中心稍远一些,但胜在环境清幽,而且治安口碑要好得多。

希望这些建议能帮你做出合适的决定。如果你想了解更多特定社区的信息或需要其他建议,随时可以联系我。毕竟我们也好久没联络了,能聊聊也挺好的。

祝好!

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------

顺便打个广告:

欢迎朋友们加入我的【知识星球】

里面有10万字的雅思口语书,内容梗概:

(1) 78个Part 1话题语料 (P9-P141)

(2) 54个Part 3话题语料 (P142-274)

(3) 36个Part 2话题语料 (P275-347)

(4) 雅思口语高分tips (P348-364)

(5) 雅思口语高分词汇表达 (P365-407)

这本口语书是PDF的,放在了我的知识星球,星球里除了这本书,还有雅思听说读写、语法基础知识等内容。

星球目前的价格是388元/年,欢迎加入。如不适合,星球可以3天无理由退款,付的款会原路返还给你。