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题目:

It will be better to have wide use of driverless cars for both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

审题:

  • Type: Opinion 观点类雅思大作文 (partially agree)
  • Body 1: benefits for society include less traffic congestion due to accidents and poor driving
  • Body 2: however, drawbacks are that it takes away from the enjoyment of driving and can infringe upon personal privacy

范文:

There is a school of thought that suggests the wide-spread adoption of using driverless vehicles is beneficial for citizens and the general society at large. I only partially agree with this opinion, as there are privacy concerns, and the fear that it will inhibit the joy many people presently receive from driving.

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One of the main benefits driverless cars can bring to society is that they will likely reduce traffic congestion, especially in cities. In order for the concept of driverless automobiles to successfully operate, the on-board navigation system will be connected to a centralized network of information nodes that relay traffic information to the vehicle. Altogether, this should prevent accidents, and the resultant traffic backlogs, and by proxy, can only enhance the traffic conditions of any metropolitan society. It can also give the driver ease of mind while commuting, as driving will not require any effort from the individual.

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It is, however, precisely this interconnectedness between the vehicle and a centralized traffic system hub that concerns some people with regard to privacy. This concern stems from the fact that a centralized information center would be able to know exactly the location of the vehicle, and as such, even the person inside the vehicle. While many may feel this privacy concern is unimportant, there are certainly those that would feel anxious having some larger central body tracking their every move. Perhaps the most serious concern however, is that the age-old joy of driving will be suppressed, and relegated to the dustbin of history.

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In conclusion, I believe the mass adoption of driverless vehicles will greatly benefit society, as it will lead to a reduction of both accidents and traffic jams; despite this though, as a person who enjoys driving, and for many within the population that also receive the same joy, the appearance of the driverless car seems like the inevitable extinction of one of life’s little pleasures, not to mention that it is slightly unnerving to be tracked no matter where one ventures.

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