

- 【24】雅思写作背一句:饼图柱状图混合小作文-水资源的分布和利用
你好呀,欢迎收听:英语考试Cat 🐱🐱🐱🐱 我第一次考雅思,写作拿了7.5分,其中的一个备考方法是,精读Mac的雅思写作范文。 我也知道,一个人很难坚持,所以我想带你读范文。 今天,是带你朗读Mac雅思范文的第24天。 我们的任务很简单,只背1句话。 题目 The charts below show the distribution of the world's water and the usage of water in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Mac 范文 Conversely, Canada's primary usage of water, hovering around the 50% mark, is in industry, whilst the least, sitting at 18%, is for agriculture and 30% for domestic purposes. 相反,加拿大的用水用途主要为工业,占比接近50%,其农业用水最少,仅为18%,住宅用水占30%。 语法要点 1️⃣ 句子结构分析 主句:“Canada's primary usage of water is in industry” 这是一个主系表结构。 * 主语:“Canada's primary usage of water” ,在加拿大,水的主要用途。 * 系表:“is in industry” ,“is” 为系动词,“in industry” 是介词短语作表语,表明主要用途在工业领域。 插入语:“hovering around the 50% mark” 现在分词短语作插入语,对 “Canada's primary usage of water” 进行补充说明,表明其在用水量上徘徊在 50% 左右的水平。 并列从句:“whilst the least, sitting at 18%, is for agriculture and 30% for domestic purposes” “whilst” 是连词,意为 “而”,用于连接两个并列的内容,形成对比。 “the least” 为主语,指 “最少的(用水量占比)”。 “sitting at 18%” 是现在分词短语作后置定语,修饰 “the least”,说明这个最少占比为 18%。 “is for agriculture” 是系表结构,表明这部分用水量用于农业。 “and 30% for domestic purposes” 与 “is for agriculture” 并列,省略了系动词 “is”,完整形式为 “and 30% is for domestic purposes”,说明 30% 的用水量用于家庭用途。 2️⃣ 重点词汇解析 conversely:副词,意为 “相反地”,用于引出与前文相反的观点或情况。 活学活用: Some people like to stay up late; conversely, others prefer to go to bed early. 有些人喜欢熬夜,另一些人则更喜欢早睡。 hover around:“在…… 附近徘徊;在…… 上下波动”。这里表示用水量在 50% 这个数值附近波动。 活学活用: The number of tourists in this city hovers around 10,000 during the off-season. 淡季时这个城市的游客数量在 1 万人左右波动。 mark:名词,此处指 “(表示数量、水平等的)数值,标记”。 活学活用: The inflation rate is above the government's target mark. 通货膨胀率高于政府的目标数值。 sit at:在这里表示 “(数量、比例等)处于(某一水平)”。 活学活用: The price of this product sits at a reasonable level. 这款产品的价格处于合理水平。 domestic:形容词,“国内的;家庭的;家用的” 。 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 顺便打个广告: 欢迎朋友们加入我的【知识星球】 里面有10万字的雅思口语书,内容梗概: (1) 78个Part 1话题语料 (P9-P141) (2) 54个Part 3话题语料 (P142-274) (3) 36个Part 2话题语料 (P275-347) (4) 雅思口语高分tips (P348-364) (5) 雅思口语高分词汇表达 (P365-407) 这本口语书是PDF的,放在了我的知识星球,星球里除了这本书,还有雅思听说读写、语法基础知识等内容。 星球目前的价格是388元/年,欢迎加入。如不适合,星球可以3天无理由退款,付的款会原路返还给你。
- 雅思写作真题母语教师范文 | 应该禁止暴力电影和电子游戏吗 (25.5.24真题)
你好呀,欢迎收听:英语考试Cat 🐱🐱🐱🐱 我是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。今天,和你分享25年5月24日雅思大作文真题的原创范文。 题目: Some people think that violent films and video games have negative effects on people and should be banned. Others think that they are just sources of relaxation. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. 范文 There are those who argue that violent movies and computer games can have a harmful impact on individuals and ought to be prohibited, whereas others view them as harmless forms of entertainment. This essay shall examine both viewpoints; however, in my opinion, though I believe such activities serve as relaxation for adults, children must be protected through parental and legal restrictions. One of the primary reasons, according to some, violent films and games should be banned is that it can lead to increased aggression and desensitization, especially among younger audiences and game players. Exposure to repeated scenes of killing, brutality, and abusive behavior might influence impressionable minds, encouraging imitation or reducing sensitivity to real-world violence and abuse. In extreme cases, individuals with underlying psychological issues may become more prone to aggressive behavior after engaging with this type of content, and as such, advocates support banning violent media, namely films and video games, to maintain a healthier and safer social environment. On the other hand, many citizens see violent films and games merely as outlets for stress relief and as a form of escapism, especially among adults, as most consumers are able to distinguish clearly between fictional violence and real-life behavior. Many studies have also failed to show conclusive evidence that links media violence to real-life aggression in the general population, even though there does seem to be some causation between viewing violence and the uptick in aggression in children. The banning of such content outright, therefore, may be seen as an overreach that unnecessarily limits creative freedom and personal choice, yet regulating violent content amongst children is a viable alternative that can help protect the most vulnerable. In conclusion, although violent films and games can be safely enjoyed by most adults as a form of relaxation, targeted restrictions are necessary to shield children from potential harm, and so in my opinion, a balance should be struck between personal choice and public responsibility. [Image] 有人认为,暴力电影和电子游戏会对个人产生不良影响,应当予以禁止;另一些人则视其为无害的娱乐形式。本文将探讨双方观点,但在我看来,尽管这类活动可作为成年人的放松方式,仍需通过家长监督和法律约束保护儿童。 一些人主张禁止暴力电影和游戏,主要原因在于其可能导致攻击性增强和情感麻木,尤其对年轻观众和玩家影响更大。反复接触杀戮、暴行和虐待场景,可能会影响缺乏判断力的心智,诱发模仿行为,或降低对现实中暴力与虐待的敏感度。在极端情况下,本身有心理问题的人在接触此类内容后,更易产生攻击倾向。因此,支持者主张禁止暴力媒体(即电影和电子游戏),以维护更健康、安全的社会环境。 另一方面,许多人认为暴力电影和游戏只是成年人释放压力、逃避现实的途径,因为大多数消费者能够清晰区分虚构暴力与现实行为。多项研究也未能确凿证明,媒体暴力与普通人群的现实攻击行为存在直接关联,尽管观看暴力内容与儿童攻击性上升之间似乎存在一定因果关系。因此,彻底禁止此类内容可能被视为过度干预,不必要地限制了创作自由和个人选择。然而,对儿童接触暴力内容进行监管是可行的替代方案,有助于保护最易受伤害的群体。 总之,尽管大多数成年人可将暴力电影和游戏作为安全的放松方式,但仍需有针对性地限制儿童接触,以避免潜在危害。因此我认为,应在个人选择与公共责任之间寻求平衡。 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 顺便打个广告: 欢迎朋友们加入我的【知识星球】 里面有10万字的雅思口语书,内容梗概: (1) 78个Part 1话题语料 (P9-P141) (2) 54个Part 3话题语料 (P142-274) (3) 36个Part 2话题语料 (P275-347) (4) 雅思口语高分tips (P348-364) (5) 雅思口语高分词汇表达 (P365-407) 这本口语书是PDF的,放在了我的知识星球,星球里除了这本书,还有雅思听说读写、语法基础知识等内容。 星球目前的价格是388元/年,欢迎加入。如不适合,星球可以3天无理由退款,付的款会原路返还给你。
- [23] 雅思写作背一句:饼图柱状图混合小作文-水资源的分布和利用
你好呀,欢迎收听:英语考试Cat 🐱🐱🐱🐱 我第一次考雅思,写作拿了7.5分,其中的一个备考方法是,精读Mac的雅思写作范文。 我也知道,一个人很难坚持,所以我想带你读范文。 今天,是带你朗读Mac雅思范文的第23天。 我们的任务很简单,只背1句话。 题目 The charts below show the distribution of the world's water and the usage of water in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Mac 范文 Saudi Arabia exhibits the same pattern though both agricultural and industrial consumption stand 10% higher than Egypt’s, while domestic usage is almost half that of the African nation. 中文大意 沙特阿拉伯的情况类似,但其农业和工业用水分别比埃及高出10%,其住宅用水几乎是埃及的一半。 语法要点 1️⃣ 句子结构分析 Saudi Arabia exhibits the same pattern though both agricultural and industrial consumption stand 10% higher than Egypt’s, while domestic usage is almost half that of the African nation. 主句: Saudi Arabia exhibits the same pattern 让步状语从句: though both agricultural and industrial consumption stand 10% higher than Egypt’s * though:连词,意思是“虽然”,用来引导让步状语从句,尽管沙特阿拉伯有一些不同之处(农业和工业用水高出埃及10%)。 * both agricultural and industrial consumption:并列主语,“农业用水”和“工业用水”。 stand 10% higher than Egypt’s * stand:动词,表示“处于”某个状态,相当于“are”。 * 10% higher:表示数值“高出10%”。 * Egypt’s:省略了 consumption,完整应该是 “higher than Egypt’s consumption”。 并列从句: while domestic usage is almost half that of the African nation * while:连词,表示“而”,用于对比上下文的不同点。 * domestic usage:主语,意思是“国内消费”。 * is almost half:谓语,表示“几乎是……的一半”。 * that of the African nation:用“that of”代指“埃及的国内用水”。 2️⃣ 重点词汇解析 1. exhibits (verb 动词) 展示、展现,强调呈现出某种特定的模式或特点= shows, demonstrates,多用于正式场合,特别是在描述数据或趋势时。 活学活用: The data exhibits a clear upward trend. (数据显示出明显的上升趋势。) 2. stand (verb 动词) 处于某种状态(这里表示数值上的对比),常用于描述统计数据的位置,比如 "stand at a level" 或 "stand higher/lower than..." 活学活用: * The temperature stands at 30 degrees. (温度保持在30摄氏度。) * Our sales stand 20% higher than last year’s. (我们的销量比去年高出20%。) 3. domestic usage 指家庭或本地的资源、能源等消耗。usage:使用或消费,比如 energy usage(能源使用)。 4. that of 用来代指前文提到的某事物,避免重复。例如这里“that of the African nation”代指“埃及的国内消费” 。 活学活用: Our growth rate is higher than that of our competitors. (我们的增长率比竞争对手的高。) 5. while:连词,表示“而”或“虽然”,用于对比两个情况。 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 顺便打个广告: 欢迎朋友们加入我的【知识星球】 里面有10万字的雅思口语书,内容梗概: (1) 78个Part 1话题语料 (P9-P141) (2) 54个Part 3话题语料 (P142-274) (3) 36个Part 2话题语料 (P275-347) (4) 雅思口语高分tips (P348-364) (5) 雅思口语高分词汇表达 (P365-407) 这本口语书是PDF的,放在了我的知识星球,星球里除了这本书,还有雅思听说读写、语法基础知识等内容。 星球目前的价格是388元/年,欢迎加入。如不适合,星球可以3天无理由退款,付的款会原路返还给你。
- 雅思写作真题母语教师范文 | 柱状图:悉尼墨尔本两个年份的通勤方式对比 (25.4.26真题)
你好呀,欢迎收听:英语考试Cat 🐱🐱🐱🐱 我是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。今天,和你分享25年4月26日雅思小作文真题的原创范文。 题目: The bar chart shows the proportion of people using different types of transport to work in Sydney and Melbourne in 2006 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. [Image] The bar chart compares the proportion of people commuting to work, broken down into four modes of transport, namely private car, public transport, cycling, and walking, in Sydney and Melbourne in 2006 and 2011. Overall, driving remained the most common means of commuting in both cities across both years, despite a slight decline, whereas public transport usage increased in both locations, with cycling and walking accounting for a much smaller share and showing only minimal changes. In 2006, 70.5% of Sydney workers used private cars, a figure that dropped marginally to approximately 68.7% in 2011, a similar trend also observed in Melbourne, where car usage had decreased by 2% from 74.8%. These decreases in automobile use were offset by the number of employed citizens using public transport to commute to work, rising by 2.1% from 20.7% in Sydney and by 2.4% from 15.5% in Melbourne. Cycling continued to be the least used form of transport in both cities, although it experienced modest growth, with the proportion in Sydney increasing slightly from 0.7% to 1.0% and edging up by 0.4% in Melbourne from 1.2% in 2006. Conversely, the percentage of people walking remained relatively stable, though it declined slightly by 0.1% in both cities when comparing the two years, with Sydney at 5.1% and Melbourne at 4.0% in 2011. In essence, while private cars dominated commuting patterns, there was a clear shift towards greater public transport use, alongside minimal yet positive changes in cycling rates; however, walking to work showed a slight decrease. [Image] 这张柱状图对比了2006年和2011年悉尼与墨尔本两地民众采用四种交通方式(即私家车、公共交通、骑自行车和步行)通勤上班的比例。 总体而言,尽管略有下降,在这两个年份里,开车仍是这两座城市中最常见的通勤方式。而两座城市的公共交通使用率均有所上升,骑自行车和步行的占比则小得多,且变化甚微。 2006年,悉尼有70.5%的上班族使用私家车通勤,到2011年这一比例微降至约68.7%。墨尔本也呈现出类似趋势,汽车使用率从74.8%下降了2%。私家车使用量的这些下降,被选择乘坐公共交通通勤的上班族数量的增加所抵消。悉尼乘坐公共交通的比例从20.7%上升了2.1%,墨尔本则从15.5%上升了2.4% 。 在这两座城市中,骑自行车仍然是最不常用的交通方式,不过也有小幅增长。悉尼骑自行车通勤的比例从0.7% 略微上升至1.0%,墨尔本则从2006年的1.2% 小幅攀升了0.4% 。相反,步行上班的比例相对稳定,但与2006年相比,这两座城市在2011年都略有下降,降幅为0.1% ,悉尼降至5.1%,墨尔本降至4.0% 。 本质上,尽管私家车在通勤方式中占据主导地位,但明显有向更多使用公共交通转变的趋势,同时骑自行车的比例也有虽小但积极的变化;不过,步行上班的比例略有下降。 [Image] ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 顺便打个广告: 欢迎朋友们加入我的【知识星球】 里面有10万字的雅思口语书,内容梗概: (1) 78个Part 1话题语料 (P9-P141) (2) 54个Part 3话题语料 (P142-274) (3) 36个Part 2话题语料 (P275-347) (4) 雅思口语高分tips (P348-364) (5) 雅思口语高分词汇表达 (P365-407) 这本口语书是PDF的,放在了我的知识星球,星球里除了这本书,还有雅思听说读写、语法基础知识等内容。 星球目前的价格是388元/年,欢迎加入。如不适合,星球可以3天无理由退款,付的款会原路返还给你。
- 雅思写作真题8.5分范文 | 澳洲阿德莱德3月8日小作文
你好呀,欢迎收听:英语考试Cat 🐱🐱🐱🐱 我是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。今天,和你分享澳洲阿德莱德3月8日雅思小作文真题的原创范文。 [Image] 题目: The chart below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. [Image] The bar chart compares the number of films produced by five different countries, labeled A to E, over a three-year period from 2007 to 2009. Overall, while most nations showed stable production, country A consistently produced the highest number of films throughout the period, whereas country B recorded a noticeable increase and country E remained the lowest producer. In 2007, country A led with approximately 90 films, a figure repeated in 2008 before experiencing a slight decline in 2009, while country B, by contrast, saw a gradual rise from around 50 films in 2007 to over 70 in 2009, narrowing the gap with country A. Country C began with the lowest figure registered by any country across the entire period, at just under 10 films in 2007, yet had doubled this number by 2009. The remaining two countries, D and E, maintained low and relatively stable production levels, with country D consistently producing slightly under 20 films each year, while country E remained steady at just over 10 films annually, with only minimal variation. In essence, while country A retained its lead in film production and country B showed clear gains, country C demonstrated a strong upward trend from the lowest starting point, and the remaining two countries maintained modest and stable output across all three years. [Image] 该柱状图对比了从2007年到2009年这三年间,五个不同国家(分别标记为A至E)制作的电影数量。 总体而言,多数国家的电影产量保持稳定。在此期间,A国始终是电影产量最高的国家;B国产量有显著增长;E国则一直是产量最低的国家。 2007年,A国以约90部电影的产量领先,2008年产量与之持平,2009年略有下降。相比之下,B国的产量从2007年的约50部逐渐增加到2009年的70多部,与A国的差距不断缩小。C国在2007年的产量是所有国家在这三年里最低的,不到10部,但到2009年时,产量已翻了一番。 另外两个国家,D国和E国,产量一直较低且相对稳定。D国每年的产量始终略低于20部,E国则稳定在每年略高于10部,仅有极小的波动。 本质上,A国在电影制作方面保持领先地位,B国产量明显提升,C国从最低起点呈现出强劲的增长态势,而另外两个国家在这三年里产量都维持在较低且稳定的水平。 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 顺便打个广告: 欢迎朋友们加入我的【知识星球】 里面有10万字的雅思口语书,内容梗概: (1) 78个Part 1话题语料 (P9-P141) (2) 54个Part 3话题语料 (P142-274) (3) 36个Part 2话题语料 (P275-347) (4) 雅思口语高分tips (P348-364) (5) 雅思口语高分词汇表达 (P365-407) 这本口语书是PDF的,放在了我的知识星球,星球里除了这本书,还有雅思听说读写、语法基础知识等内容。 星球目前的价格是388元/年,欢迎加入。如不适合,星球可以3天无理由退款,付的款会原路返还给你。
- [22] 雅思写作背一句:饼图柱状图混合小作文-水资源的分布和利用
你好呀,欢迎收听:英语考试Cat 🐱🐱🐱🐱 我第一次考雅思,写作拿了7.5分,其中的一个备考方法是,精读Mac的雅思写作范文。 我也知道,一个人很难坚持,所以我想带你读范文。 今天,是带你朗读Mac雅思范文的第22天。 我们的任务很简单,只背1句话。 题目 The charts below show the distribution of the world's water and the usage of water in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Mac 范文 Breaking down fresh water further by analyzing its use in the three aforementioned countries, it is seen that Egypt’s agriculture sector consumes nearly 40%, while domestic and industrial utilization sit at roughly 10% each. 中文大意 进一步分析上述三国的淡水使用情况后可以发现,埃及的农业用水接近40%,其住宅和工业用水分别约为10%。 语法要点 1️⃣ 句子结构分析 (1) 主句: it is seen that Egypt’s agriculture sector consumes nearly 40%, while domestic and industrial utilization sit at roughly 10% each. * 主语: it。但it只是一个“形式主语”,用来让句子结构更加自然和流畅。真正的主语是后面的宾语从句。 * 谓语: is seen * 宾语从句: that Egypt’s agriculture sector consumes nearly 40%, while domestic and industrial utilization sit at roughly 10% each. * while: 对比连词,对比农业用水和其他两个用途(家庭和工业用水)的数据。 (2) 从句: Breaking down fresh water further by analyzing its use in the three aforementioned countries, 状语,描述主句动作发生的背景或条件,解释“通过进一步分析淡水在三个前述国家的使用情况”。 * 动词: Breaking down(分解/分析) * 副词: further(进一步) * 介词短语: by analyzing its use in the three aforementioned countries(通过分析淡水在三个前述国家的使用方式) 2️⃣ 重点词汇解析 (1) Breaking down: 拆解/分解,常用在数据分析的语境里。 Breaking down the chart into smaller sections, we can analyze each category more clearly. 通过将图表分解成更小的部分,我们可以更清楚地分析每一类别。 (2) further: 进一步;用来说明分析的深度加深。 (3) aforementioned: 之前提到的(通常用于学术或正式写作中),相当于“previously mentioned”。 The aforementioned points highlight the importance of teamwork. 前述观点强调了团队合作的重要性。 (4) consumes: 消耗,使用。 consume也是学术写作中的一个常用词,比“use”更正式。 This factory consumes large amounts of electricity daily. 这家工厂每天消耗大量电力。 (5) sit at: (数据/数字)处于某个水平。 The sales figures sit at roughly 500 units per month. 销售数据约为每月500台。 (6) roughly: 大约,接近;表达不精确的数据。同义词:approximately。 (7) utilization: 利用/使用,正式用词,相当于“use”,但比“use”更正式。 The utilization of resources in this project was highly efficient. 这个项目里的资源利用非常高效。 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 顺便打个广告: 欢迎朋友们加入我的【知识星球】 里面有10万字的雅思口语书,内容梗概: (1) 78个Part 1话题语料 (P9-P141) (2) 54个Part 3话题语料 (P142-274) (3) 36个Part 2话题语料 (P275-347) (4) 雅思口语高分tips (P348-364) (5) 雅思口语高分词汇表达 (P365-407) 这本口语书是PDF的,放在了我的知识星球,星球里除了这本书,还有雅思听说读写、语法基础知识等内容。 星球目前的价格是388元/年,欢迎加入。如不适合,星球可以3天无理由退款,付的款会原路返还给你。
- 雅思写作真题7分范文 | 保护古建筑 (25.3.29真题)
你好呀,欢迎收听:英语考试Cat 🐱🐱🐱🐱 我是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。 今天,和你分享2025年2月22日IELTS雅思大作文真题的原创范文。 题目: Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. Do you agree or disagree? [Image] Modern communication technology has reshaped how people interact, yet many raise concerns over its impact on social relationships, and that despite the convenience it brings in staying connected, its excessive use often weakens in-person interactions and fosters digital dependency, ultimately undermining genuine social connections—an argument I fully support. While enabling instant communication, the epidemic of screen time during face-to-face interactions has become a major concern. Meaningful conversations thrive on presence and attentiveness, yet many people habitually check their devices when engaging with others, and this persistent distraction not only diminishes the depth of real-world connections but also reduces active listening and emotional engagement. Consequently, while technology enhances accessibility by allowing instant interaction, its overuse in social settings creates emotional detachment and weakens the authenticity of relationships, making in-person interactions feel increasingly superficial and less fulfilling over time. Beyond excessive screen time, another major drawback of digital communication, despite its vast networking opportunities, is the phenomenon of digital addiction, which further erodes the quality of social relationships. Social media and messaging applications allow people to stay in touch effortlessly, but excessive reliance on these platforms often leads to compulsive scrolling and an overattachment to virtual interactions, and this dependence gradually causes individuals to neglect in-person connections. As a result, while digital tools connect people globally, their overuse can manifest as social isolation, weakened emotional intimacy, and a diminished depth of human relationships. In essence, although modern technology enhances communication, its overuse disrupts authentic social interactions and fosters emotional distance, making mindful usage essential to preserving strong relationships in the digital age. [Image] 现代通信技术重塑了人们互动的方式,然而,许多人对其给人际关系带来的影响表示担忧。尽管它为保持联系带来了便利,但过度使用往往会削弱面对面的交流,并催生数字依赖,最终损害真正的社交关系——对此观点我完全认同。 在实现即时通讯的同时,面对面交流时过度沉迷于电子设备的现象已成为一个主要问题。有意义的对话依赖于全身心的投入和专注,但很多人在与他人交往时习惯性地查看自己的电子设备。这种持续的分心不仅降低了现实世界中人际关系的深度,还减少了积极倾听和情感投入。因此,虽然技术通过即时互动提升了沟通的便捷性,但在社交场合中过度使用它会造成情感上的疏离,并削弱人际关系的真实性,久而久之,使得面对面的交流愈发流于表面,难以令人满足。 除了过度沉迷电子设备,数字通信尽管提供了广泛的社交机会,但其另一个主要弊端是数字成瘾现象,这进一步侵蚀了人际关系的质量。社交媒体和即时通讯应用让人们能轻松保持联系,但过度依赖这些平台往往会导致人们不由自主地不断刷屏,对虚拟互动过度依赖。这种依赖逐渐使人们忽视了面对面的交流。因此,尽管数字工具将全球各地的人们联系在一起,但过度使用可能会导致社交孤立、情感亲密度降低以及人际关系的深度变浅。 从本质上来说,尽管现代技术改善了沟通方式,但过度使用会扰乱真实的社交互动,造成情感上的隔阂。在数字时代,谨慎合理地使用通信技术对于维护稳固的人际关系至关重要。 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 顺便打个广告: 欢迎朋友们加入我的【知识星球】 里面有10万字的雅思口语书,内容梗概: (1) 78个Part 1话题语料 (P9-P141) (2) 54个Part 3话题语料 (P142-274) (3) 36个Part 2话题语料 (P275-347) (4) 雅思口语高分tips (P348-364) (5) 雅思口语高分词汇表达 (P365-407) 这本口语书是PDF的,放在了我的知识星球,星球里除了这本书,还有雅思听说读写、语法基础知识等内容。 星球目前的价格是388元/年,欢迎加入。如不适合,星球可以3天无理由退款,付的款会原路返还给你。
- 雅思写作真题母语教师范文 | 现代通信技术对人际关系的影响 (25.2.22真题)
你好呀,欢迎收听:英语考试Cat 🐱🐱🐱🐱 我是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。 今天,和你分享2025年2月22日IELTS雅思大作文真题的原创范文。 题目: Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. Do you agree or disagree? 许多人认为现代通信技术对人际关系有一些负面影响。你同意还是不同意? 范文: Modern communication technology has reshaped how people interact, yet many raise concerns over its impact on social relationships, and that despite the convenience it brings in staying connected, its excessive use often weakens in-person interactions and fosters digital dependency, ultimately undermining genuine social connections—an argument I fully support. While enabling instant communication, the epidemic of screen time during face-to-face interactions has become a major concern. Meaningful conversations thrive on presence and attentiveness, yet many people habitually check their devices when engaging with others, and this persistent distraction not only diminishes the depth of real-world connections but also reduces active listening and emotional engagement. Consequently, while technology enhances accessibility by allowing instant interaction, its overuse in social settings creates emotional detachment and weakens the authenticity of relationships, making in-person interactions feel increasingly superficial and less fulfilling over time. Beyond excessive screen time, another major drawback of digital communication, despite its vast networking opportunities, is the phenomenon of digital addiction, which further erodes the quality of social relationships. Social media and messaging applications allow people to stay in touch effortlessly, but excessive reliance on these platforms often leads to compulsive scrolling and an overattachment to virtual interactions, and this dependence gradually causes individuals to neglect in-person connections. As a result, while digital tools connect people globally, their overuse can manifest as social isolation, weakened emotional intimacy, and a diminished depth of human relationships. In essence, although modern technology enhances communication, its overuse disrupts authentic social interactions and fosters emotional distance, making mindful usage essential to preserving strong relationships in the digital age. [Image] 现代通信技术重塑了人们互动的方式,然而,许多人对其给人际关系带来的影响表示担忧。尽管它为保持联系带来了便利,但过度使用往往会削弱面对面的交流,并催生数字依赖,最终损害真正的社交关系——对此观点我完全认同。 在实现即时通讯的同时,面对面交流时过度沉迷于电子设备的现象已成为一个主要问题。有意义的对话依赖于全身心的投入和专注,但很多人在与他人交往时习惯性地查看自己的电子设备。这种持续的分心不仅降低了现实世界中人际关系的深度,还减少了积极倾听和情感投入。因此,虽然技术通过即时互动提升了沟通的便捷性,但在社交场合中过度使用它会造成情感上的疏离,并削弱人际关系的真实性,久而久之,使得面对面的交流愈发流于表面,难以令人满足。 除了过度沉迷电子设备,数字通信尽管提供了广泛的社交机会,但其另一个主要弊端是数字成瘾现象,这进一步侵蚀了人际关系的质量。社交媒体和即时通讯应用让人们能轻松保持联系,但过度依赖这些平台往往会导致人们不由自主地不断刷屏,对虚拟互动过度依赖。这种依赖逐渐使人们忽视了面对面的交流。因此,尽管数字工具将全球各地的人们联系在一起,但过度使用可能会导致社交孤立、情感亲密度降低以及人际关系的深度变浅。 从本质上来说,尽管现代技术改善了沟通方式,但过度使用会扰乱真实的社交互动,造成情感上的隔阂。在数字时代,谨慎合理地使用通信技术对于维护稳固的人际关系至关重要。 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 顺便打个广告: 欢迎朋友们加入我的【知识星球】 里面有10万字的雅思口语书,内容梗概: (1) 78个Part 1话题语料 (P9-P141) (2) 54个Part 3话题语料 (P142-274) (3) 36个Part 2话题语料 (P275-347) (4) 雅思口语高分tips (P348-364) (5) 雅思口语高分词汇表达 (P365-407) 这本口语书是PDF的,放在了我的知识星球,星球里除了这本书,还有雅思听说读写、语法基础知识等内容。 星球目前的价格是388元/年,欢迎加入。如不适合,星球可以3天无理由退款,付的款会原路返还给你。
- [21] 雅思写作背一句:饼图柱状图混合小作文-水资源的分布和利用
你好呀,欢迎收听:英语考试Cat 🐱🐱🐱🐱 我第一次考雅思,写作拿了7.5分,其中的一个备考方法是,精读Mac的雅思写作范文。 我也知道,一个人很难坚持,所以我想带你读范文。 今天,是带你朗读Mac雅思范文的第21天。 我们的任务很简单,只背1句话。 题目 The charts below show the distribution of the world's water and the usage of water in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Mac 范文 It is reported that 97.5% of the world’s water consists of saline water, leaving just 2.5% as fresh water, of which nearly 70% is confined to glaciers and permanent snow and almost 30% constituting underground water, with only a negligible amount of 0.3% as accessible fresh water in stark contrast to the expansive reserves of saline water. 中文大意 全球97.5%的水为咸水,剩余的2.5%为淡水,其中近70%的淡水以冰川和永久积雪的形式存在,近30%为地下水,可获取的淡水量仅占0.3%,与海量的咸水储备形成鲜明对比。 语法要点 1️⃣ 句子结构分析 这句话是一个复杂句,包含多个修饰成分。 ✅ 主句 It is reported that 97.5% of the world’s water consists of saline water, 主语: It (形式主语) 谓语: is reported 真正的主语:97.5% of the world’s water consists of saline water 图表显示,全球97.5%的水是咸水。 ✅伴随状语 leaving just 2.5% as fresh water, 谓语: leaving 宾语: just 2.5% as fresh water 剩余的2.5%是淡水。 ✅定语从句 of which nearly 70% is confined to glaciers and permanent snow and almost 30% constituting underground water, 先行词: 上一句的fresh water 谓语: is confined / constituting 将近70%的淡水以冰川和永久积雪的形式存在,约30%为地下水。 ✅伴随状语 with only a negligible amount of 0.3% as accessible fresh water in stark contrast to the expansive reserves of saline water. 介词短语: with only a negligible amount of 0.3% 这个伴随状语起补充说明的作用: 可获取的淡水量仅占0.3%,这与广阔的咸水储量形成鲜明对比。 2️⃣ 重点词汇解析 * Saline water:咸水 * Fresh water:淡水 * Confined to:被限制在...范围内 * Glaciers:冰川 * Permanent snow:永久积雪 * Constituting:构成 * Underground water:地下水 * Negligible amount:微不足道的量 * Accessible fresh water:可获取的淡水 * Stark contrast:鲜明对比 * Expansive reserves:广阔的储量 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 顺便打个广告: 欢迎朋友们加入我的【知识星球】 里面有10万字的雅思口语书,内容梗概: (1) 78个Part 1话题语料 (P9-P141) (2) 54个Part 3话题语料 (P142-274) (3) 36个Part 2话题语料 (P275-347) (4) 雅思口语高分tips (P348-364) (5) 雅思口语高分词汇表达 (P365-407) 这本口语书是PDF的,放在了我的知识星球,星球里除了这本书,还有雅思听说读写、语法基础知识等内容。 星球目前的价格是388元/年,欢迎加入。如不适合,星球可以3天无理由退款,付的款会原路返还给你。
- 雅思写作真题母语教师范文 | 环保只靠本地资源 (25.2.15真题)
你好呀,欢迎收听:英语考试Cat 🐱🐱🐱🐱 我是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。 今天,和你分享2025年2月15日IELTS雅思大作文真题的原创范文。 [Image] 题目: The best way to protect the environment is to use local resources, such as food or building materials rather than transporting resources from other places. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 范文: There are those who believe that exclusively utilizing local resources, for example foodstuffs and construction materials, is the best method to protect the environment as it vastly reduces the need for long-distance logistical resources, an opinion I disagree with for the following reasons. One of the main reasons why the idea of using only local materials is flawed, even though it may stimulate regional economies, is that limiting international trade to protect the environment disregards consumer needs and market diversity. Local resources cannot always satisfy consumer preferences, and additionally, by restricting imports, it may drive up prices, placing an unnecessary burden on consumers. Advancements in sustainable fuels and eco-friendly technologies, moreover, can significantly reduce the carbon footprint from transportation, allowing international trade to persist without compromising environmental goals, and so, mandating the procurement of only local goods can be considered short-sighted. In addition, isolationism brought on by local-centric economies would exacerbate environmental issues in underdeveloped countries by stifling their economic progress. Many developing nations rely heavily on export revenues to fund essential infrastructure projects, such as wastewater treatment facilities, which are vital for maintaining a clean environment. Cutting off these revenue streams could worsen environmental conditions, leading to more severe ecological degradation in the long-term, and ultimately, creating conditions that are harmful not only to the economy but also to social and political stability in these impoverished countries. In conclusion, while using local resources has merits, rejecting international trade for environmental reasons is, in my view, misguided, and that a more balanced approach, focused on technological advancements and sustainable global cooperation, would better serve both the environment and the global economy. [Image] 有人认为,使用当地资源,例如食品和建筑材料,是保护环境的最佳方式,因为这能大幅减少对长途物流资源的需求。但出于以下原因,我不同意这一观点。 尽管只使用当地资源可能会刺激区域经济,但它存在缺陷的主要原因之一是,为了保护环境而限制国际贸易忽视了消费者的需求和市场的多样性。当地资源并不总能满足消费者的偏好,此外,通过限制进口,可能会抬高价格,给消费者带来不必要的负担。而且,可持续燃料和环保技术的进步能够显著减少运输过程中的碳足迹,使得国际贸易能够在不影响环保目标的前提下继续进行。因此,强制要求只采购当地商品的做法可以说是短视的。 此外,以本地为中心的经济所带来的孤立主义会抑制欠发达国家的经济发展,从而加剧这些国家的环境问题。许多发展中国家严重依赖出口收入来为关键的基础设施项目提供资金,比如污水处理设施,而这些设施对于保持环境清洁至关重要。切断这些收入来源可能会使环境状况恶化,从长远来看,导致更严重的生态退化,最终不仅对这些贫困国家的经济有害,还会影响其社会和政治稳定。 总之,虽然使用当地资源有其优点,但在我看来,出于环保原因拒绝国际贸易是错误的。更平衡的方法,即专注于技术进步和可持续的全球合作,将能更好地兼顾环境保护和全球经济发展。 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 顺便打个广告: 欢迎朋友们加入我的【知识星球】 里面有10万字的雅思口语书,内容梗概: (1) 78个Part 1话题语料 (P9-P141) (2) 54个Part 3话题语料 (P142-274) (3) 36个Part 2话题语料 (P275-347) (4) 雅思口语高分tips (P348-364) (5) 雅思口语高分词汇表达 (P365-407) 这本口语书是PDF的,放在了我的知识星球,星球里除了这本书,还有雅思听说读写、语法基础知识等内容。 星球目前的价格是388元/年,欢迎加入。如不适合,星球可以3天无理由退款,付的款会原路返还给你。
- [20] 雅思写作背1句:混合图小作文-水资源的分布和利用
你好呀,欢迎收听:英语考试Cat 🐱🐱🐱🐱 我第一次考雅思,写作拿了7.5分,其中的一个备考方法是,精读Mac的雅思写作范文。 我也知道,一个人很难坚持,所以我想带你读范文。 今天,是带你朗读Mac雅思范文的第20天。 我们的任务很简单,只背1句话。 题目 The charts below show the distribution of the world's water and the usage of water in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Mac 范文 Overall, saline water constitutes the vast majority of the world’s total water, with fresh water making up only a small fraction, for which glaciated ice and snow accounts for the largest proportion; meanwhile, the usage of water in agriculture dominates in Egypt and Saudi Arabia, whereas industry is the most significant user in Canada. 总体来讲,咸水占全球水资源的绝大部分,淡水仅占少数,其中大部分淡水以冰川和永久积雪的形式存在;与此同时,埃及和沙特阿拉伯的农业用水占主导,而加拿大则以工业用水为主。 语法要点 1.1 主句部分: * 主语 (Subject): saline water(咸水) * 谓语 (Verb): constitutes(构成,占据) * 宾语 (Object): the vast majority of the world’s total water(世界总水量的绝大部分) 含义: 咸水构成了全球水资源的绝大部分。 1.2 第一个伴随状语从句 (with…): * 主语 (Subject): fresh water(淡水) * 谓语 (Verb): making up(构成) * 宾语 (Object): only a small fraction(仅占很小的一部分) * 修饰成分 (Relative Clause): for which glaciated ice and snow accounts for the largest proportion(其中冰川和积雪占最大比例) 含义: 淡水仅占全球水资源很小的一部分,其中冰川和积雪占了最大比例。 1.3 第二个主句 (分号后的内容): * 主语 (Subject): the usage of water in agriculture(农业用水) * 谓语 (Verb): dominates(占主导地位) * 地点状语 (Place): in Egypt and Saudi Arabia(在埃及和沙特阿拉伯) 含义: 在埃及和沙特阿拉伯,农业用水占主导地位。 对比 (whereas): * 主语 (Subject): industry(工业) * 系动词 (Linking Verb): is(是) * 表语 (Predicate Complement): the most significant user in Canada(在加拿大是最大的用水部门) * 含义: 而在加拿大,工业是最大的用水部门。 ✅ 2. 逻辑连接词: * Overall(整体来看) → 总体陈述 * with(伴随状语) → 描述淡水的比例 * for which(其中) → 说明淡水中冰川和积雪的占比 * Meanwhile(与此同时) → 引出对比 * Whereas(而) → 进行对比 ✅ 3. 必备词汇: 3.1 描述比例 * Constitutes → 构成,占据 * Makes up → 占据,构成 * Accounts for → 占据,占比 3.2 对比比较 * Dominates → 主导,占据主导地位 * Whereas → 而,却 * Meanwhile → 与此同时 3.3 逻辑连接词 * Overall → 整体来看 * With...making up... → 伴随状语 * 表示伴随主句发生的情况。 * For which → 其中 -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 顺便打个广告: 这两天我又更新了雅思口语书,看了一下字数,居然有111124字! 内容梗概: (1) 78个Part 1话题语料 (P9-P141) (2) 54个Part 3话题语料 (P142-274) (3) 36个Part 2话题语料 (P275-347) (4) 雅思口语高分tips (P348-364) (5) 雅思口语高分词汇表达 (P365-407) 这本口语书是PDF的,放在了我的知识星球,星球里除了这本书,还有雅思听说读写、语法基础知识等内容。 星球目前的价格是388元/年,欢迎加入。 如不适合,星球可以3天无理由退款,付的款会原路返还给你。
- 雅思写作真题母语教师范文 | 学商业 vs 学历史 (25.1.18真题)
你好呀,欢迎收听:英语考试Cat 🐱🐱🐱🐱 我是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。 今天,和你分享2025年1月18日IELTS雅思大作文真题的原创范文。 题目: Some people think that there could be more benefits to society if more people study business than history. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 范文: There are those who believe that society might benefit more if a greater number of individuals pursued business studies rather than history since the practical advantages of business knowledge can drive economic growth and innovation. Though I agree with this position from an economic perspective, I believe history remains an essential field of study. One of the main benefits of studying business is that it equips individuals with skills and knowledge that can significantly contribute to economic development. Entrepreneurs and business professionals generate employment, foster innovation, and enhance productivity through strategic decision-making and resource allocation. Business education, additionally, encourages problem-solving and leadership, both of which are critical in tackling global challenges such as unemployment and financial instability, and as such, an increase in business graduates can create a ripple effect, strengthening not only local economies but also international markets. History remains indispensable, however, as it fosters a deeper understanding of humanity’s shared experiences. By examining historical events, societies can identify patterns of conflict, exploitation, and governance that have shaped the present, allowing a wider knowledge of past follies and errors in nation management and building. Lessons from the economic depressions of the 20th century, for instance, can inform economic advisors which fiscal policies should be implemented, while reflections on the atrocities of war reinforce the importance of peacebuilding efforts, and so, without historical awareness, societies risk repeating past mistakes, jeopardizing both progress and stability. In conclusion, while the economic benefits of prioritizing business education are undeniable, it is my opinion that history is equally important as it can provide an ethical and strategic context to modern challenges; hence, a balance between the two disciplines ensures that society not only prospers economically but also grows wisely, avoiding the pitfalls of ignorance and short-sightedness. 有人认为,如果更多的人学习商业而非历史,社会可能会受益更多,因为商业知识的实际优势能够推动经济增长和创新。虽然从经济角度来看,我认同这一观点,但我认为历史仍然是一个至关重要的研究领域。 学习商业的主要好处之一在于,它为个人提供了能够显著促进经济发展的技能和知识。企业家和商业专业人士通过战略决策和资源分配来创造就业机会、推动创新并提高生产力。此外,商业教育鼓励解决问题的能力和领导力的培养,这两者对于应对诸如失业和金融不稳定等全球性挑战至关重要。因此,商业专业毕业生数量的增加能够产生连锁反应,不仅增强地方经济,也能提升国际市场。 然而,历史依旧不可或缺,因为它有助于人们更深入地理解人类的共同经历。通过研究历史事件,社会能够识别那些塑造了当下的冲突、剥削和治理模式,从而更广泛地了解过去在国家管理和建设方面的愚蠢行为和错误。例如,从20世纪经济大萧条中吸取的教训可以为经济顾问提供参考,告知他们应该实施哪些财政政策;而对战争暴行的反思则强化了建设和平努力的重要性。所以,如果没有历史意识,社会就有可能重蹈覆辙,危及进步与稳定。 总之,虽然优先发展商业教育所带来的经济效益是不可否认的,但我认为历史同样重要,因为它能为现代挑战提供伦理和战略背景。因此,在这两个学科之间取得平衡,可确保社会不仅在经济上繁荣发展,还能明智地成长,避免陷入无知和短视的陷阱。 -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 顺便打个广告: 这两天我又更新了雅思口语书,看了一下字数,居然有111124字! 内容梗概: (1) 78个Part 1话题语料 (P9-P141) (2) 54个Part 3话题语料 (P142-274) (3) 36个Part 2话题语料 (P275-347) (4) 雅思口语高分tips (P348-364) (5) 雅思口语高分词汇表达 (P365-407) 这本口语书是PDF的,放在了我的知识星球,星球里除了这本书,还有雅思听说读写、语法基础知识等内容。 星球目前的价格是388元/年,欢迎加入。 如不适合,星球可以3天无理由退款,付的款会原路返还给你。
- [19] 雅思写作背1句:混合图小作文 - 水资源的分布和利用
你好呀,欢迎收听:英语考试Cat 🐱🐱🐱🐱 我第一次考雅思,写作拿了7.5分,其中的一个备考方法是,精读Mac的雅思写作范文。 我也知道,一个人很难坚持,所以我想带你读范文。 今天,是带你朗读Mac雅思范文的第19天。 我们的任务很简单,只背1句话。 题目 The charts below show the distribution of the world's water and the usage of water in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. [Image] Mac 范文 The pie charts show the proportions of fresh and salt water worldwide, breaking down fresh water into four categories, while the bar chart compares the percentage of water used for residential, industrial, and agricultural purposes in Egypt, Saudi Arabia, and Canada. 饼图展示了全球淡水与咸水的比例,并进一步细分了淡水的四个类别,柱状图则对比了埃及、沙特阿拉伯和加拿大三个国家在住宅、工业和农业领域的用水比例。 语法要点 1. 主句 The pie charts show the proportions of fresh and salt water worldwide * 主语: The pie charts 表示句子的主题,即“饼图”。 * 谓语: show 表示动作,“展示”。 * 宾语: the proportions of fresh and salt water worldwide 2. 分词短语 breaking down fresh water into four categories 现在分词短语作伴随状语,补充说明主句中饼图展示的内容,表示“将淡水分为四类”。 这句话的隐含主语是 the pie charts,与主句主语保持一致。 * breaking down: 动词现在分词,表示“分解”。 * fresh water: 宾语,表示分解的对象“淡水”。 * into four categories: 介词短语修饰 breaking down,表示“分为四个类别”。 3. 连接词 while 表示对比关系,连接两个主句,对比说明饼图和柱状图各自展示的内容。 4. 第二主句 the bar chart compares the percentage of water used for residential, industrial, and agricultural purposes in Egypt, Saudi Arabia, and Canada * 主语: The bar chart 表示句子的主题,即“柱状图”。 * 谓语 (Verb): compares 表示动作,“比较”。 * 宾语 (Object): the percentage of water used for residential, industrial, and agricultural purposes used for residential, industrial, and agricultural purposes: 过去分词短语修饰 water,表示水的用途。 地点状语: in Egypt, Saudi Arabia, and Canada 修饰 compares,表示比较的范围,即埃及、沙特阿拉伯和加拿大。 大致总结一下: 第一部分: 主句 The pie charts show... 提供主干信息:饼图展示了全球淡水和咸水的比例,并将淡水分为四类。 伴随状语: breaking down fresh water into four categories 进一步补充说明饼图的信息。 连接词: while 表示对比,连接饼图和柱状图的内容。 第二部分: 主句 the bar chart compares... 描述柱状图的内容,展示三个国家在三类用途上的用水比例。 重点词汇 * proportions: 比例 * breaking down: 分解 * categories: 类别 * percentage: 百分比 * residential, industrial, agricultural purposes: 描述具体用水用途 * while: 连接词,表示对比关系 -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 顺便打个广告: 这两天我又更新了雅思口语书,看了一下字数,居然有111124字! 内容梗概: (1) 78个Part 1话题语料 (P9-P141) (2) 54个Part 3话题语料 (P142-274) (3) 36个Part 2话题语料 (P275-347) (4) 雅思口语高分tips (P348-364) (5) 雅思口语高分词汇表达 (P365-407) 这本口语书是PDF的,放在了我的知识星球,星球里除了这本书,还有雅思听说读写、语法基础知识等内容。 星球目前的价格是388元/年,欢迎加入。 如不适合,星球可以3天无理由退款,付的款会原路返还给你。
- 雅思写作母语教师范文 | 柱状图小作文
你好呀,欢迎收听:英语考试Cat 🐱🐱🐱🐱 我是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。 题目: [图片] The bar chart contrasts the time spent by 10 to 15-year-olds of both genders in the UK chatting on the Internet and playing on game consoles during an average school day, categorized into three time durations: less than an hour, 1 to 3 hours, and 4 hours or more. Overall, boys and girls show contrasting preferences, with girls spending significantly more time chatting online compared to boys, whereas boys overwhelmingly dominate in the time spent playing video games. When chatting online, 35% of girls engage in this activity for 1 to 3 hours, compared to just under 26% for their male counterparts, with approximately 9% of females chatting for 4 hours or more, double the proportion of boys. In contrast, the percentage of boys spending less than an hour on this activity witnesses the same proportion as those that spend 1-3 hours, just 1-2% higher when compared to girls. Conversely, over 44% of boys partake in playing computer games for 1 to 3 hours or more, with about 10% participating in this activity for 4 or more hours. By comparison, in total, just over half of girls play, and only 2% play for 4 hours or more, with only 14% playing for 1 to 3 hours. In essence, the data and observations presented showcase distinct gender-based preferences in their leisure activities. 该柱状图对比了英国10-15岁青少年在上学日花在网上聊天和玩游戏上的时间,并根据时间长短分为1小时以下、1-3小时和4小时或以上三个类别。 整体来看,男女生在娱乐活动上的偏好存在明显差异:女孩显然花更多时间在网上聊天,而男孩在玩电子游戏上的时间投入远超过女孩。 35%的女孩每天花1-3小时在线聊天,男孩网聊的比例略低,仅为26%左右。约9%的女孩每天在线聊天的时间超过4小时,这一比例是男孩的两倍。相比之下,男孩每天花不到1小时网聊和每天花1-3小时网聊的比例相当,仅比女孩高出1-2个百分点。 相反,超过44%的男孩每天花1-3小时或更多时间玩电子游戏,其中约10%的男孩每天玩4小时或更长时间。相比之下,女孩玩游戏的总比例刚过一半,其中只有2%的女孩每天玩游戏的时间达到4小时或以上,而每天玩1-3小时的比例也仅为14%。 总的来说,这些数据显示了青少年在休闲活动中存在明显的性别偏好。 -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 顺便打个广告: 这两天我又更新了雅思口语书,看了一下字数,居然有111124字! 内容梗概: (1) 78个Part 1话题语料 (P9-P141) (2) 54个Part 3话题语料 (P142-274) (3) 36个Part 2话题语料 (P275-347) (4) 雅思口语高分tips (P348-364) (5) 雅思口语高分词汇表达 (P365-407) 这本口语书是PDF的,放在了我的知识星球,星球里除了这本书,还有雅思听说读写、语法基础知识等内容。 星球目前的价格是388元/年,欢迎加入。 如不适合,星球可以3天无理由退款,付的款会原路返还给你。
- [18] 雅思写作背1句 | 多饼图小作文:咖啡产业(24.5.18真题范文)
你好呀,欢迎收听:英语考试Cat 🐱🐱🐱🐱 我第一次考雅思,写作拿了7.5分,其中的一个备考方法是,精读Mac的雅思写作范文。 我也知道,一个人很难坚持,所以我想带你读范文。 今天,是带你朗读Mac雅思范文的第18天。 我们的任务很简单,只背1句话。 题目 [Image] Mac 范文 The share of profit amongst business sectors associated with coffee, dominated by the delivery business with 51% of profit intake, saw the other three segments having a profit share of under 25%, with retailers coming in at 24%, producers 9% less, and actual coffee bean exporters receiving a mere 10% of total profit engendered by coffee. 咖啡相关业务的利润份额中,配送业务占了51%的利润收入,其他三种业务的利润均低于25%,其中零售占24%,制造商少9个百分点,咖啡豆出口商仅获得了咖啡产业总利润的10%。 语法要点 1. 句子结构 主句: The share of profit amongst business sectors associated with coffee, dominated by the delivery business with 51% of profit intake, saw the other three segments having a profit share of under 25%. 主语: The share of profit (amongst business sectors associated with coffee) → amongst business sectors associated with coffee为后置定语,修饰the share of profit → 表示“(咖啡相关各业务的)利润份额”。 定语: dominated by the delivery business with 51% of profit intake → 用分词短语修饰主语,表明“配送业务占据了 51% 的利润份额,是主导部分”。 谓语: saw → 表示“见证”,连接主语和后面的补充说明部分。 宾语 the other three segments → 其他三种业务 宾语补足语: having a profit share of under 25% → (其他三种业务的)利润份额均低于 25%。 数据细节补充: with retailers coming in at 24%, producers 9% less, and actual coffee bean exporters receiving a mere 10% of total profit engendered by coffee. 伴随状语(with + 名词 + 现在分词) with的两个宾语用and连接: 1. retailers coming in... and 2. actual coffee bean exporters receiving... 用 with... 结构补充细节,列举零售商、生产商和出口商的具体利润比例。 2. 词汇解析 (1) associated with: 与……相关;与……有联系 现学现用: Industries associated with renewable energy are booming. 可再生能源相关的产业正在蓬勃发展。 (2) dominated by: 由……主导;被……控制 现学现用: The market is dominated by a few large companies. (3) saw:见证 现学现用: The last decade saw tremendous changes in technology. 过去十年见证了技术的巨大变化。 (4) came in at: 达到(某个数值) 现学现用: The company’s revenue came in at $10 million last year. 去年这家公司的收入达到了1000万美元。 (5) engendered by: 由……引起;由……产生 现学现用: The success was engendered by hard work and dedication. 成功是由努力和专注带来的。 -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 顺便打个广告: 这两天我又更新了雅思口语书,看了一下字数,居然有111124字! 内容梗概: (1) 78个Part 1话题语料 (P9-P141) (2) 54个Part 3话题语料 (P142-274) (3) 36个Part 2话题语料 (P275-347) (4) 雅思口语高分tips (P348-364) (5) 雅思口语高分词汇表达 (P365-407) 这本口语书是PDF的,放在了我的知识星球,星球里除了这本书,还有雅思听说读写、语法基础知识等内容。 星球目前的价格是388元/年,欢迎加入。 如不适合,星球可以3天无理由退款,付的款会原路返还给你。