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题目：
The diagram below gives information about stages of the process of producing of olive oil.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Mac范文：
The flow chart details the stages involved in the production of olive oil, beginning with the harvesting of olives and concluding with their storage and sale.
Overall, the process comprises seven distinct steps, starting from the manual collection of olives and finishing with their eventual distribution, with notable intermediate procedures including rinsing, smashing, pressing, and separating.
Initially, ripe olives are picked from the tree and transferred into large sacks. They are subsequently rinsed with cold water on a conveyor belt to remove impurities. Following this, the clean olives are smashed, producing both olive paste and their residual pits, with the latter being discarded. The resulting paste is then packed into perforated bags which allow liquids to drain during the next stage. These bags are placed into a pressing machine, and the extracted mixture is subjected to separation. At this point, olive oil and water are divided, with only the oil collected for commercial use.
In the final phase, the olive oil is stored appropriately and then transported for sale in shops or markets, completing the production cycle.
这张流程图详细介绍了橄榄油生产的各个阶段，从橄榄的采摘开始，到橄榄油的储存和销售结束。
总体而言，该过程包含七个不同的步骤，从人工采摘橄榄开始，到橄榄油最终分销结束，其中值得注意的中间工序包括冲洗、粉碎、压榨和分离。
首先，从树上采摘成熟的橄榄，然后将其装入大袋中。随后，橄榄在传送带上用冷水冲洗，以去除杂质。之后，干净的橄榄被粉碎，产生橄榄酱和剩余的果核，果核会被丢弃。接着，得到的橄榄酱被装入带孔的袋子里，这些袋子能让液体在后续阶段流出。这些袋子被放入压榨机中，榨出的混合物会进行分离。此时，橄榄油和水被分离开来，只有橄榄油会被收集起来用于商业用途。
在最后一个阶段，橄榄油被妥善储存，然后被运送到商店或市场销售，至此完成整个生产周期。
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